Dec 2024
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It's 2024 and we are living in Estonia. It's December and it is cold. We have the tree up and trimmed, lights strung everywhere, and the fireplace is lit. But there is NO SNOW!
Read MoreConspiracies. Corruption. Survival.
Retired Naval Flight Officer. Attorney. Author. Join me on my publication journey.
FIVE YEARS IN A VIETNAMESE PRISON CAMP.
A DISHONORABLE DISCHARGE WAITING WHEN HE GOT HOME.
Captain Paul Coburn died alone in his remote mountain cabin, and the police called it suicide before anyone looked twice.
His nephew is a Navy lieutenant on a Pentagon tour, and the only person who won't let it go. What he finds in Paul's house does not match the official report. When he requests his uncle's service record, what comes back is a life struck through in black ink. Five years as a prisoner of war in Vietnam. A dishonorable discharge for desertion. Everything else taken out, page after page.
But Paul left a trail from Washington into Appalachia, laid down by a man who knew somebody would come looking.
Everything hidden leaves a trace.
Genre: Military Thriller / Conspiracy Fiction
Publisher: Coburn House
Formats: Hardcover, ebook, audiobook
Sheriff's Deputy Jolene Coburn overcomes an Oxycontin addiction and her guilt stemming from the death of her partner to save her hometown from a murderous cult leader and rebuild her career with the Alleghany County Sheriff's Office.
Set in the North Carolina mountains, THE MOTH is a story of small-town corruption, addiction, and the family secrets that bind us together or tear us apart. Inspired by my childhood in Appalachia and personal experience with Oxycontin's effects on a community.
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Dec 2024
It's 2024 and we are living in Estonia. It's December and it is cold. We have the tree up and trimmed, lights strung everywhere, and the fireplace is lit. But there is NO SNOW!
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Before we write a single word, we've already made this decision. But what do you prefer? What if you like both? Sometimes, I find myself filled with energy and ready to write while standing on the balls of my feet.
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I was drafting a query letter describing Dishonored's setting as "against an Appalachia-inspired soundtrack." Someone said this was "the language of movies" and that "books do not have soundtracks." That got me thinking.
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I became a Naval Flight Officer on the P-3C Orion after losing my leg in a boating accident, becoming the first amputee to earn Naval Aviation Wings. As a flight officer—not a pilot, there's a difference—I flew anti-submarine warfare missions all over the world, with deployments taking me from Hawaii to Europe and Africa.
At the Pentagon, I earned my law degree at night from Catholic University while working days. After retiring from active duty, I clerked for the U.S. Senate Judiciary Committee before returning to the Navy as a procurement attorney.
My varied careers—minor league baseball, naval aviation, government law—informs everything I write. These experiences give me the authenticity to write about military conspiracies, institutional corruption, and characters navigating systems designed to break them.
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